Well this is not where I’m at but it fell out of me anyway. I often think that with poems - they sort of pour as though you’ve tipped yourself a little further than you intended. There’s very little intention; just feelings, emotions and metaphors. This one is about having a broken heart - I agree, not exactly unploughed ground in poetry - but it’s here anyway.
Heartache
What’s this ache?
This indigestion?
Fracture lines made
By suggestion,
Heart attack or
Creaking age, this
Leaking rage
That burns to wage
Its war upon my question
What’s this pain?
So deeply trembles
Lonely earth
That still resembles
All I knew of
All of you
That shatters through
The love I reassembled
What’s this longing?
Broken heart whose
Tumbled walls
Lie loose and broken
No excuse for
Words we’ve spoken
Now an echo, now a token
Left for me to choose
What is this ache
This sadness for?
If not to show
That life is sore
Beneath the lines of
Rain and spatter
Pain that shatters
Blame and scatter,
Love is real and raw
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